Writing Task 2: Живое написание эссе #3

Играем в рулетку! Выбираем тему Writing Task 2 наугад и пишем эссе. Я не только разберу тему в деталях, но и покажу, какое эссе может получиться!

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Попробуйте сделать так же — это очень хороший вариант подготовки к эссе.

Итак, тема эссе:

Some people say that mobile phones should not be allowed in public places, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

В этом видео показан подробный план написания эссе и собственно рождение самого эссе!

Обратите внимание на вокабулярные конструкции и доводы, использованные в эссе, — возможно, вы сможете их применить в своих работах.

Вот такое эссе получилось (10 предложений и 298 слов):

It is argued that the use of mobile phones should be forbidden in public places due to several reasons, while there is an opposite opinion that the freedom to use the phones in such settings should never be restricted. This essay will examine both viewpoints and will attempt to demonstrate my personal opinion on this issue.
 
To start with, not allowing people to utilize their mobile devices in public places could be a reasonable measure. For instance, in some situations mobile phones should be disallowed for the sake of security – thus, students normally cannot take advantage of their phones at the exams, airplane passengers are usually asked to turn off their devices during take-off and landing, or governmental building visitors cannot use their phones to take photos inside. In addition, using mobile phones in certain cases, namely important business meetings, is seen an impolite behavior, and it should not be tolerated.
 
However, the opponents of restricting mobile technology usage in public places claim that sometimes mobile phones are indispensable. One of the examples could be a situation when a person faces an imminent danger, such as when they are lost in an unknown neighborhood or when there is a need to urgently call ambulance or a firefighter brigade. On the other hand, using a mobile phone by tourists visiting public sights is fully understandable because this category of people would like to take pictures with their phones, which should be considered legal and safe.
 
With the above reasons in mind, the issue of using mobile devices should be treated from various perspectives, and in some cases mobile phones should be completely switched off for safety reasons, which I fully support. Nevertheless, I believe that such devices should be allowed in public places when there is an urgent necessity.

 
 
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